This is a transcript of what one of our media teachers said about our magazine front cover that we completed for our preliminary task. I was unable to find a way of uploading the recording.
"Okay I think it suits the formality of the magazine, good use of colours that reflect the school colours. What I would say is that there needs to be more sub-headings about what is going on in school. I think the 'Misbourne Mag' needs to be a little bit bigger. You could maybe have some lines seperating the three images at the top, really to emphasis that those are different photographs. You have a good range of different shots.. so you have a long shot, a close up and another long shot. Your puff doesnt really fit in with the colours, and maybe think about moving it over a bit or put it somewhere else, not sure. But I think the title does definately needs to be bigger".
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